Some people believe that universities should focus on providing academic skills, while others argue that they should prepare students for their future careers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Overall band 7.0 - criterion breakdown
- Task Response7.0
Both views are addressed with developed support and the writer's own position is clear. Some ideas (e.g. internships) could be expanded with more specific examples to push toward 8.
- Coherence and Cohesion7.0
Logical paragraphing and clear topic sentences. Cohesive devices ('On the one hand', 'In my view') are used appropriately, occasionally mechanically.
- Lexical Resource7.0
A solid range of academic vocabulary ('intellectual habits', 'tolerate ambiguity', 'either-or framing') with no significant errors. Less-common collocations are present but not consistent throughout.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy7.0
A mix of complex structures with frequent error-free sentences. A few minor article and preposition slips prevent a higher band.